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Old 10-06-2006, 08:22 PM
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I was going through this, picking out spelling errors but it's just easier to say cap the i's, obituaries is the correct spelling, and laive should be alive. Otherwise, this topic deserves probably more than it's gotten so far. My dad was VERY close to being sent out too, by about 6 hours before he got his release slips. I was as scared as you were, and are. I understand and have to say, this wasn't bad for the emotion behind it, because I can really relate with this and that's one of those topics that hit the heart. Even though my dad didn't end up going, several of my friend's parents won't be coming home. It's a terrible feeling. Nicely done.

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Old 10-06-2006, 09:35 PM
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The spelling and grammar was never checked.
It literally went straight from my mind to the notepad I typed it in and I didn't bother fixing any errors.
I'll correct that eventually.
It's meant to be emotional. It was exactly what I felt at the time. I'm quite happy with it, reading it back.
I think it's something alot of people can relate to.
I want to do some more work on it because I know it could use much editing.
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