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Old 04-07-2017, 08:38 PM
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Achievement is a formula.
Once you have the setting;
Then one has the arrangement.
Insofar troubles wage,
Experiences are its game!
Above all, prism is the one
The thing loves cannot wane
Philosophers fall away like sand,
Creeds fade into another,
Till those prisms are Bliss;
'Tis for all seasons,
Such emanations evermore.

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Mmmm, prism flavored.

It don't get any better than this.
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Hey Bot,

Was twitching to change "game" to "gain" - usually the most useful lessons we learn are when we're ploughing through hard times.

Not comfortable with "prism is the one" as its never one thing - multi-faceted, distorted, transparent, clarified....didn't feel right for me.

I liked this - your writing has really developed.
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