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Old 06-26-2006, 03:10 PM
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"Perfectly Burned"

Ouch!
Why am I hurting?
I'll tell you now.
All weekend I went swimming.
It was so hot, and of coarse, I forgot to put on sun screen.
That day was so perfect.
Just me swimming, and noone there to bother me.
It was just me, the pool, and the sun.
Swimming felt so great, but now I feel horrible.
I'm sun burned.
Some parts of my arms are light, and the other parts are red.
It burns so much.
My arms, back, and face ache with a burning pain.
The sad thing is, next time I go swimming, I will most likely forget to put on sun screen again.
After all, I am smart book-wise, but I don't have much commen sense.



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Good thing you aren't a redhead, you would fry. LOL
Sorry your in such pain. I am glad you had fun though.
This is a good poem.

One half of my arms are light, and the other halves are red.

Just doesn't sound right.. maybe try parts instead??
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