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Old 02-23-2012, 10:16 PM
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Default Species 0 Plot and Character...This is a LGBT novel...

Please Tell me what you think of my book... It's called Species 0?
The book is called Species 0 and it is a LGBT Fantasy Novel. Here are the characters and some story plots...

Adam/Poppy- Adam can read and control minds. He use to be a firefighter, and he met his boyfriend Poppy at a award service after he saved four people in a fire. Adam couldn't save his best-friend, and the friend ends up in a coma, who has the power to use his mind to talk to people, and blames Adam for his death, and the two have a mental affair, which causes trouble with him and Poppy. Poppy is a "merman" but he doesn't know, he discovers he can control water.

Pepper- Has the power to control ice. Pepper was kidnapped by Species 0, and they trick him into doing his dirty work. Poppy and Pepper are cautionary tales of one another, if Poppy went down the same road as Pepper he would be in the same position.

Andy/Dallas- Twin Bothers. Andy is the wild one he has the power to make anyone fall in love with him, while Dallas has the gift to nuke any other with powers.

Alex can speed and is dating Jordyn, his girlfriend, and has a secret boyfriend Andrew. They are all in high-school.

Tamra. Was original born Tim, but when he found out he could shape shift, he turned himself into Tamra.

Dr. Evans- Human, and runs the facilitate Species 0.

Please let me know what you think also how to add females into the story.

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Old 02-23-2012, 10:45 PM
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("...can't judge by just the plot alone, I need to see an extract, an excerpt then where then one sees what it really is..." mentioned the goblin)
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Old 02-24-2012, 03:04 AM
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Is this really an LGBTQetc novel or is it a fantasy novel with gay/transexual characters ? It doesn't read like it is about being gay.

Like the wise old Goblin pointed out there isn't really enough to tell. It has the potential for a good story, so why not try writing it? As you write new characters will appear and if the story needs more girls it will be a girl.
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