Wow, thank you Lance, such an informative reply!
First off, about the picture, I'm not really trying to but a brand on myself or any of my writings. I write to get all the "stuff" out of me i cant otherwise realize that was there and i come here to share it with the forum population for them to hopefully enjoy. having said that if i ever were to get serious about publishing and getting my stuff out there then a picture just of myself would make complete sense. My work life is far from poetry, not that that really matters lol
I didn't even see the grammar mistakes until you explained it like you did, may have been because i posted that piece with my phone , which also for some reason capitalizes the first word of every sentence but i will be editing this very soon so thanks for the tips!
and also wanted to thank you for posting this:
"put aside the very idea of poetry - instead write simple descriptive sentences, one after another, until you run out of things to describe. Then do the same thing again the next day."
it inspired me to write this