Originally Posted by NokturnalMe
Perhaps this structure was intentional?
I wish I knew the author's age, it would really help!
: = )
I went through a box of my writing today and there are so many pieces composed in just this fashion...*sigh.*
One must have a reason to keep typing (or scribble) down the page and so often it's for sound, for rhyme, for seeing how clever one can be, etc. Apparently we must move through all these devices to finally arrive at some semblance of an authentic voice that speaks with clarity and resolve.
Hidrolic, if you are a younger person I well understand because I've been there myself. If you are serious about poetry I want to encourage you to put the devices aside - put aside the very idea of poetry - instead write simple descriptive sentences, one after another, until you run out of things to describe. Then do the same thing again the next day!