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Old 07-15-2007, 11:10 AM
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Life is here (2x)
yeah, yeah....

Life is powerful
Life is wonderful
Life is cool
Life really rules....

Life is here for you
And here for me
Life is the gift that God gave to us
Life is the start of something old or new
So use it wisely, don't you be a fool

[chorus:]

Life (5x)

Life is wonderful....

Life (5x)

Life is for me and you....

Life (5x)

Life is a journey for us to experince

Yeah, yeah, oooh, oooh.....


Life is a gift for me, and you

[chorus:]

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OK, after reading this and noting the one main chorus breakup that was relatively in the right place, i could say maybe not as much repeat and more defination?.... i like the extended long chorus , just the repeating a kind of cheshe... i applaud your thought on the idea though, you just scraped the ice on that one, feels needed to be more indept... like how far?.... anyhow... rambling lyrics wanderer.. sining out
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