Heh. That's a rather funny poem. Not to offend if this was based on a real event, but it just struck me as humourous.
capitalization needs to be looked over, but maybe that's how you intended it, I'm not sure.
I love the title, it's such a funny title, what drew me to this in the first place.
overall, great job. I've read of you in my necromantic observations into the threads of years past, and you have talent.
I am Siegmeyer of Catarina, and you shall feel my wrarh!