I love your screen name fits perfectly with your poem Can You Come Out and Play?
A childlike title, innocent and well remembered by us all, caught my eye.
The connection to an unseen only felt world is beautiful. Words choices bring this theme to life. Analogies of what our senses find and the halls of Time images are great. I love the elevation thought and the positive feel to our gifts from God.
Final line . . .
Will you make A difference today? makes the reader want to, it is motivating. Well done Stephen J Vattimo, you got me thinking and feeling,
"now I float away like honey in the sun"