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Old 04-21-2017, 01:48 PM
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Started this piece over a year ago. Changed some things. Finished.
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Tigo let go of his pecker. Rolled his eyes. "Mamua have you ever even tasted pussy before?"

"What's that?" I ask.

"What's pussy?"

"No, that." I point to a canoe sailing through the sky. A big trail of smoke in its wake.

"It's a canoe," Tigo says flatly.

"In the sky?"

"I guess. It says property of the U.S.A. on the side of it."

"What's that mean?"

Shrugs.

The canoe crashes into the hillside and everything flashes white.

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Wasn't there a whole bunch more of this earlier?
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I guess Tigo and Mamua never get to taste pussy.
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Was Slim Pickens in the canoe?
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