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Old 07-04-2017, 12:34 PM
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Unmoored! A pretty boat unmoored!
Yet eventide comes around!
Should someone come to guide
This pretty boat to the town?

So everyone says, upon the hour—
Just as the clock struck its countdown
One pretty boat gave up its life;
And choked its way down, down,—

The angels mentioned, upon the night—
Just as the dawn grew into flight;
One pretty boat remade its sails
And burst triumphantly to up and on!

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Old 07-04-2017, 01:12 PM
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I like the energy in this piece
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Old 07-04-2017, 01:20 PM
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@ Chat - I'm not patrolling for weekly postcount, so you could put stuff like this in poetry.
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Old 07-08-2017, 05:09 PM
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thanks, leila! @mohican, i thought it was too short so i just kinda left it in freewriting. ur welcome to change it! thanks for reading guys and gracey!
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Old 08-08-2017, 04:14 AM
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This sounds very exciting. It`s really worthy to read. I think at https://ukessay.com there is a need in writers like you are. Great piece!
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