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Old 06-03-2008, 10:23 AM
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Default push and pull in my brain


Random thoughts dance across my brain
I wish it were a elegant dance
Not this push and pull
Swirl and flip that is occurring

My thoughts used to be in columns and lines
Then you came along
Pushing and pulling
Through my brain

The dance never ends
One thought leads to the next
Is this right
Is this wrong

Was it you
Or me
Lets blame it on
Society

After all
As Robert said
Nothing gold can stay
Its still the same



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The occurring at the end of stanza one feels of, maybe find a replacement.
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The occurring at the end of stanza one feels of, maybe find a replacement.

thank you ill work on that
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