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Old 09-02-2017, 01:49 PM
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It seems that people are trying to steal my package. When people do this they not only kill the show, but they destroy me as an actor and all earning capability I have, they are merciless cunts.

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Semicolon between 'have' and 'they'.
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
Semicolon between 'have' and 'they'.

You caught that, and missed the plural of 'thief' is 'thieves'?

What a complex mind you have BP.
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Old 09-03-2017, 05:51 AM
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Or an em dash or two complete sentences.
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