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Old 06-27-2007, 02:38 PM
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(Make her) proud

My kid just sitting there
Stain down that long dark road
Watching as the cars pass us by

It happed so fast
Those few young years
That his mom went away to die

All I got to say, he says
Is why, is it this way?

The way that mom died

Leaving us for heaven

I guess she’s ok now

Watching from way above

Hey dad lets make her proud

Making my way to New York
To start a new life
Lust to make a start from anew without her

Seeing the city lights
From 10 miles away
My sun sits up and watches
After crying, he looks at me again and says

All I got to say, he says
Is why, is it this way?

The way that mom died

Leaving us for heaven

I guess she’s ok now

Watching from way above

Hey dad lets make her proud

Let’s make her smile upon her face
And let her watch us go on
That is what she would want
For us to not think of her

When you hear of dragons and knights
Fighting for the very life they show
Think of your mother, watching from above
So se would be proud, will watch us forever

All I got to say, he says
Is why, is it this way?

The way that mom died

Leaving us for heaven

I guess she’s ok now

Watching from way above

Hey dad lets make her proud

To make her proud

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Old 07-31-2007, 08:17 PM
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wow wat made u think of this one? if its another sore topic just say so k
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Old 08-01-2007, 07:29 AM
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this was made for my aunt.... my grandma died not that long ago( to much overweight) and i revised some lirics to make it for her.... anyhow the origanal said grandma insted of mom
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It's a nice poem,though a bit sad...Take care~~
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I do agree it's very nice.
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