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Old 08-06-2006, 02:46 PM
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Tell the tale
Like all the children heard
Tell the tale
Floating upon the bird

Tell me the tale
Of the man that died
Tell me the tale
Of the little girl that lied

Tell me that tale
Where the teenager lived
Tell me that tale
Where the teenager thrived

Tell the tale
Of the little boys first homerun
Tell the tale
Of that same little boys accident with a gun

Tell me the tale
When the good guy comes first
Tell me the tale
When evils clinched its thirst

Tell me that tale
When someone actually cared
Tell me that tale
When that little girl ceased to be scared

Tell the tale
Of all the little crying girls
Tell the tale
Of all their tears of blood streaming down their curls

Tell me the tale
Of the suicidal kids that dont know
Tell me the tale
Of all the people that just let them go

Tell me those tales
How many tales can you tell?
Tell me those tales
Before all those kids go to hell

Tell me every tale
About the time you cared
Tell me every tale
So you wont be scared

Tell me all those tales
So you wont be scared

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Old 08-06-2006, 02:58 PM
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Quite fascinating, but why do you care if I told you all these tales? If you already know them. It's a nice poem.
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Old 08-06-2006, 03:00 PM
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lol - Thank you for reading
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Old 08-06-2006, 03:29 PM
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Lose the reptition and you'll have something much stronger.
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Old 08-06-2006, 04:32 PM
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Hey do you want to know a tale?
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Old 08-06-2006, 06:43 PM
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Always I love listening (hints why I wrote this.) Anyone that wants to vent, or tell me something just to have someone listen, feel free to tell it in any of my threads, or Pager/PM/Email me a link to your own thread of it, or PM me directly
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Old 08-08-2006, 04:03 AM
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I really don't know about this stuff, I've read alot of your other stuff and it's good. this one just seems like it's... we'll Idk. like it goes no where. but that's just my take on it.
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Old 08-08-2006, 07:09 AM
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Totally understandable Thank you for your thoughts
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Originally Posted by kalibantre
Lose the reptition and you'll have something much stronger.
I thought the same thing. over all, I liked it.
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Very....interesting...hehe
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Old 08-08-2006, 07:31 AM
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Thank ya both I appreciate it
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