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Old 02-08-2007, 06:59 AM
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Ok, so all i have so far is a man is sent to look into an island where some things have been happening but he gets taken by soldiers.
While in his cell a man shows up and tells him thanks to him they have to destroy everything and the prologue ends with the island exploding and the mans bosses airship watching the event.

Can anyone help me with wher i'm going?

PS: The prologue is in the Fiction board.

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Old 02-08-2007, 06:25 PM
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From the top of my head (not having read the story, jsut this blurb) :

1. The island was a research facility of somekind. Military grade weapons, inhumane scientific research (Ilse of Doctor morau and City of lost children type)

2. The man did something between the time he got on the island and the time he gets sent to his cell. He just doesn't remember. Maybe exoplore this "lsot time" trough journals, records, second hand accounting. Make an inquiry into it?

3. An island jsut blew up. Someone -else- is going to get there just because people are curious. Did any items survive (see 1 and 2 above)
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