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Old 05-05-2007, 05:30 PM
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When we were young,
we would stare into each others eyes.
We would walk hand in hand,
side by side.
So why are we apart,
in another's arms,
in another's heart.

You were the love of my life.
My joy when I was down.
My hope when I threw in
the towel.
You were all that I ever wanted.
I was all you ever needed,
but time drew a line in the ground.

Time drew a line in
our heart.
As strong as we were,
How could we ever part.
I want what we had back.
I want to make it last,
forever.

You were the love of my life.
My joy when I was down.
My hope when I threw in
the towel.
You were all that I ever wanted.
I was all you ever needed,
but time drew a line in the ground.

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Old 05-05-2007, 10:20 PM
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i liked the flow of this song... mabie needs another main verse thow seems short and finaly if you left out the wording for the verses and chorus it seems to look better on writing, that out of my system verry nice work and hope to see you more in here
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Thanks Zeb, I appreciate it.
Just recently I started writing songs, like I started in the middle of the night. I'm glad you like it though.
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