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Old 04-17-2015, 12:38 PM
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Hey!

Huh?

Hey, you!

Wha'?

Hey, you with the pen in your hand!

Me?

Yes, you, you dolt!

Dolt?

Listen! Put that pen down before you
write something you will regret!


I don't think, with all due respect, that
such a thing concerns you.


Concerns me!
Of course it concerns me!
If you write something I may read it!


Yeah, so?

So after I read it I may tell you what I think of
it!


Okay. And?

And you may not like what I have to say, dolt!

(again with the "dolt")
Go ahead and respond, if you choose to, in any manner
you please.
I know you are simply expressing your
feelings and thoughts and I support that
activity.


"Support that activity"!
What do you think I am - some kinda baby
who needs Mommy's helping hand?!
I stand on my own feet and I don't
care what anyone says!


Oh. Alright. Sure.
Uh, how did we get into this conversation (dolt)?

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Old 04-17-2015, 12:56 PM
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Sounds like someone is missing TDO.
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Old 04-17-2015, 01:24 PM
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Originally Posted by Prodigalson View Post
Sounds like someone is missing TDO.


I searched TDO but don't see anything that seems to fit the sentence.

So I ask what is TDO?
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Old 04-17-2015, 03:45 PM
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Originally Posted by Nick Pierce View Post
I searched TDO but don't see anything that seems to fit the sentence.

So I ask what is TDO?

Oh, so now you care about critique.
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Old 04-17-2015, 08:55 PM
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TDO (The Dumb One) was an argumentive member some time back. He got the boot about the same time as JustcallmeEd.
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Old 04-18-2015, 01:29 AM
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Originally Posted by Prodigalson View Post
TDO (The Dumb One) was an argumentive member some time back. He got the boot about the same time as JustcallmeEd.

Oh yeah, now I remember.

Thanks.
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Mr. Pierce?

Yes, Nick?

Nuthin'.
Just checkin' to see if you are still around.

I understand, Nick.
Carry on.

Thanks, pal.
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Thanks for the Pierce check, Nick.

Carry on.
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nick?

yeah?

you suck!

why?

because i was joking...

my, my how ugly you are.

(nice writing, nicky)
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