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I have a question... Are we allowed to ask for critiques on our rough pieces before posting them to the contest thread somewhere else on the board? Or is it supposed to be posted fresh to the board in the contest thread?
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I always understood that each piece was supposed to be fresh to the board, unseen.
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Thanks...that's what I was figuring, I just couldn't find any rules concerning it among the messages, thought I was ask.
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There is no specific rule on the matter, as technically one can ask for feedback for contest entries on WB before submitting them. The reason for this is that it is allowed for people to submit work that fits the theme of the contest even if it is older than the contest, and that they may have posted on WB at some point.

However as Lost Traveller has said there has been an understanding not to seek critique for an entry on WB before submitting. You are free to seek critiques after submitting/the contents closing, this is fine due to the no editing rule on submitted work.

So you can ask for critique for the rough draft on WB before Submitting, but it might not be well received by some members when they vote. It is your choice.

May I insted suggest you seek the advice of some friendsto help you with your rough draft.
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Can there be adult content in the entry? Can I get a little hot and steamy?
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Yes, I was wondering about that and words that some people don't like... Do we have to censor since it's public?
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A story with cursing and small amount of sexuality/violence, etc., is fine. If it's something that is more "adult-only," giving a disclaimer and hiding the story under spoiler tags would be the best option. Most of the forums here are public, except for Members Only and the Adult forum, so just use your own discretion, and chances are it'll be fine
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Can there be adult content in the entry? Can I get a little hot and steamy?
You can submit entries that contain some Adult Content material, with a disclaimer, and I may ask you to withdraw the entry if I think it is too much.
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To prevent my entry from being rejected, I have started over, deleting all the adult parts.
Thanks for letting me know, and preventing me from entering with unsuitable material.
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Okay, thanks. I just have a few cuss words in mine...and possibly a little gore...
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I have to say this was fun! It has been a while since I have written fresh and new poetry, and so it gave me the chance to dig out the pen and paper and create something fun.
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So wait...does that mean I have until June to finish my story? Umm, cause I was rushing to finish it up.
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Yeah you do, so unfair! Lol
But now you can take your time and I wish I had waited before posting mine.
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Well the extensihon was not intended, and is the result of the delay ofthe WBQ, but yes, there is now extra time for thoes that have not entered and would like to do so.
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It'll teach me to post early. Next time I am going to wait and wait and then wait some more until there is hardly any time left and then I'll post.
Hahhahaha, besides there were an awful little amount of entries in the prose section to choose from, so the extension is for the best I guess.
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If you wait to long then you'll miss the deadline though.
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Hhaha, True. I'll just post when I'm done.
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Ack! I posted mine up (a poem) and the spaces came out all wonky! I don't want to edit it, as I don't want to be disqualified, but there should only be one space between the stanzas & now there's huge big gaps. Grrrr argh stupid computer!

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You could ask a staff to correct it for you. They might be inclined to, it's not that big a change.
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Thisangel, I will corret it for you.

Edit: That better, if I tried to get the formating right but in places it was hard to tell, let me know if it still is not right.
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You see Thisangel, sometimes you don't even need to formally ask.
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Thanks Tau, that's perfect!
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I'm actually very happy there was an extension and I hadn't posted yet. While I was satisfied with what I had by deadline...I had realized I could cut stuff and find more wordage to rewrite the ending for a totally different type of story. Now I can do that, plus test read my story with a few friends to see which they like better. One ending is happy, one is dark, horror style. Two totally different feelings for the story.
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Icon6 Word Vault Contest - That Man

Gloryia - interesting storyline. The following sentence could be taken two ways:
How often have I had to place my hands over his and slowly evince the correct method?
As a question as you have indicated by the use of a question mark. Or, it could be taken as a emphatic statement. I wonder which would fit your story better.

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Icon6 Word Vault Contest - R.J. schus

The story was interesting and mystical. I found the following to be a little strange use of the word "formulate".
"...taking short pauses to formulate her way through..."
Although the dictionary definition I found would indicate that your usage could be valid, I personally would have preferred maybe "plan" or "determine".
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Icon6 Comment - The Deserted Road - Reparation

Interesting writing style. It held my attention through to the end which I somewhat anticipated. A bit of a downer, but well done.
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Icon6 Comment - Agatha Cristie's "The Deserted Road"

The story flowed along nicely with a somewhat expected ending and yet with an unexpected twist. There was one aspect that did bother me with the following:
'What time was that?' asked Jan.

Roberta looked at her watch.

'Must have been about quarter to eight.'

The colour drained from Jan's face.
The timing element is what gives Jan the supernatural link between the movie and the actual fire. However, the previous mentions of time -the movie started at seven and Caroline had to get home because it was eight-thirty - gives the reader a rather broad time period of an hour and a half. What if when Jan pulls her hand back from Caroline's arm the glowing watch face of her wrist-watch shows it's seven-forty-five?

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Aurilia - I like this! In a few words you conveyed a complete story and it's a nostalgic and interesting story. You nicely left enough unsaid for us to fill in with our own imagination. Well done!
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Thankee kindly. All I could 'see', so-to-speak, when I saw the prompt/theme were the stretches of roads that people don't/can't use anymore for whatever reason. There's a stretch of old highway near my grandparent's place in Wyoming that was abandoned when I-80 was put in, and Hwy 5 in Iowa was re-routed between Pella and Knoxville when Red Rock Dam was put in. And I've seen other examples from Maine to Washington of roads that were obviously once well-traveled but had fallen by the wayside. It always makes me feel a little sorry for them.
 

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