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Old 07-20-2018, 07:08 PM
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It has been a while,
Such skill, such style,
Such narcissism can only be
seen through a prism
a mile wide and on each side
is the face of Chinspinner.

Sinister, a guilty sphincter,
that closes on the tincture,
that brings forth once more,
in a roar and sore arse,
he who in glory basks,
that same one, that named one,
that irredeemably flamed one
of twat that comes back and back
again.

Is he here? Spy? Soldier? Sweet donut?
Sugar eruption, doughy corruption?
Edible scourge of failed circumduction.
And gone again like the wind,
for all who sinned, in all his infinite glory.

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Old 07-20-2018, 08:45 PM
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I think you’ve had a little too much of the “sod all” to be posting tonight. Maybe you should sleep it off pal.
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Old 07-21-2018, 04:08 AM
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Originally Posted by Chinspinner View Post
It has been a while,
Such skill, such style,
Such narcissism can only be
seen through a prism
a mile wide and on each side
is the face of Chinspinner.

Sinister, a guilty sphincter,
that closes on the tincture,
that brings forth once more,
in a roar and sore arse,
he who in glory basks,
that same one, that named one,
that irredeemably flamed one
of twat that comes back and back
again.

Is he here? Spy? Soldier? Sweet donut?
Sugar eruption, doughy corruption?
Edible scourge of failed circumduction.
And gone again like the wind,
for all who sinned, in all his infinite glory.

It's good to write what comes along. It keeps the juice flowing.

Was alcohol involved in this one's creation?
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Old 07-27-2018, 04:50 PM
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Originally Posted by Nick Pierce View Post
It's good to write what comes along. It keeps the juice flowing.

Was alcohol involved in this one's creation?
haha very perceptive
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Old 08-04-2018, 11:42 AM
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Oh this was fucking good.
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Old 08-04-2018, 12:15 PM
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Yeah, I was great when hammered.
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Old 08-05-2018, 12:54 AM
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("...actually I liked it..." went the goblin trying to fill in spaces suspecting it was one of those jilted moments, just "pain to open the eyes" perhaps)
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