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Old 09-02-2017, 10:14 AM
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I liked the vibe on the first tune - A monkey-is Beach Boys sort of thing, and the lyrics are "period" correct.

I liked the intro on the 2nd one but it kinda tapered out for me.

I've thought about picking up the guitar, I played it a bit when I was younger

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