uhh, wow. havent looked at this in a while.
It's very polished. while I wouldn't neccesarily read it ( It's probably geared towards younger adults) with enough content (good content, mind you) I might recommend to a friend.
I think that what you have here is a great start, but it still needs some work (finishing it, maybe?)
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