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A Soaring Few - Metaphor

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Old 10-16-2010, 12:30 PM
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A Soaring Few

If writings are a feather's wisp
to beat against the sky.
Then we together craft in this
a wing with which to fly.

This forum as a mother's coo
challenges us for more.
Each lesson like a higher view
inspires us to soar.

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I hate birds. But I don't think this could have been conveyed any better. Well written and it imbues a sense of attachment to the forums. Thank you for sharing!
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Oh, I think they should make this a sticky in the main part of the forum or something, like a poetic introduction. Very nice.
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Originally Posted by stellarworld View Post
A Soaring Few

If writings are a feather's wisp
to beat against the sky.
Then we together craft in this
a wing with which to fly.

This forum as a mother's coo
challenges us for more.
Each lesson like a higher view
inspires us to soar.
the eagle's wing,
the angel sing's
The rest of this is a waste of time...
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