It started out really good. But then it just got so mumbo-jumbo. It looked really disorganized to me and it was hard to follow. I also think that your purpose of the poem changed halfway through. At the beginning you were talking about "is it worth it". To me, this is a question to the reader... you are getting ready to explain a situation or a feeling and the reader will decide whether or not it is worth it. But when you said this:
Back to where I was
Where We were
Where I was?
When we wereÖ
I got really lost. I had no clue what you were trying to say anymore. I believe you switch tones into a "this is the way it is, whether you like it or not" type of voice. In love, that does happen alot, I agree, but I don't think that is what you wanted to convey in your poem. I could be wrong. The idea behind it is terrific. I applaude you very much for a noble attempt. And I still think you had a wonderful beginning, but you just lost focus. Keep up your work.