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Old 04-13-2018, 01:49 PM
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The broken thoughts
Sinister words
The nasty vowels
Rude consonants
Creepy syllables
Offensive phonemes
Disturbing letters
Obnoxious sentences

Whatever you said
Whether true or not
I can still see you
Utter that nonsense
Come up with stories
You were a good writer
Of lyrics and poems
Too good perhaps
Too believable
For your own good

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Old 04-18-2018, 07:22 AM
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I liked this. Poems are different for everyone. To me I imagine this piece is about a person who lies through their writing, giving off a false impression of who they are.

I liked it - regardless of what the true meaning behind it is.
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