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Old 03-29-2017, 11:59 PM
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If nothing bad comes
From overthinking it;
Stand from the tow
Of the grim reaper;

Better to be depressed
Than feel oppressed
All by yourself—
In a merry zoo;

Heaven is secured,
And all the devils reared.
Is it not in our destiny
To create some pellmell?

Doubt me not,
But call me a liar—
If you should feel
So dubiously neglected.

What confusion is it
The ones with no luck;
What sores can I heal
From this debris?

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Old 03-30-2017, 01:45 PM
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Better to be depressed
Than feel oppressed
All by yourself—
In a merry zoo;
............Got that one chat, I can relate to it.

Like the way you finished it.

What sores can I heal
From this debris?
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Old 04-02-2017, 09:35 PM
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how can you relate to it? just trying to be specific cause it's going for the same style in my book meeheeehee. and thanks!
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