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To feel like yourself
In a paramount universe
While they are all out
To try and change you
Is the best thing!

I pen this—
As if I was ne’er good enough.

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Self celebration and introspection.

Bravo!
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Chit-chat's name is Ralph?

Not what I expected😀

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Chit-chat's name is Ralph?

Not what I expected😀

I thought Ralph was the sound that preceded this poem splashing onto the page.
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Like whitman's yawp?
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Like whitman's yawp?
We don't get that in South Florida.

Send a case on over and I will give it a try.
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