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Old 01-07-2018, 04:53 PM
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Big Brick is wide as a whale but thin in spirit
She is dying and getting thin around the edges
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Old 01-07-2018, 05:18 PM
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Welcome back, dear. Nice to see your name.


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Old 01-07-2018, 05:44 PM
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Why thank you. How nice !
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The world needs a little nice, no?

Iím afraid Iím not much good at the poetry crit. But others will be along soon.


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