I like the first two lines (nice way of seeing), Couldn't get into the rest , except the imagery I got from....( shadows after my heart ) Thanks for the read,Bee. Maybe a bit too subjective. Perhaps someone come along and says it's the Bee's knees. I don't know, but it;s interesting how we can all look at a poem and see different aspects that mean more to us than another.
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