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Sitting by a tragedy—
Pointless ends and therapy,—
My eyes crystal like drip ice,—
All like the XO does not suffice;—
Somewhere out there, you’re laughing;
Because I’m on my knees, begging
Please don’t love someone else,
Drinking ecstasy from your bone
From the sill to the soul—
I stare into the casement,—
Still got your old suit and tie,
The last thing on your mind,—
I’m yours, but you're not mine—
Borded upstairs in my room,—
The rest I have been waiting for,—
Breathe your smoke up;—
You are in my lungs—
Forevermore with my lullaby
Because I chased you away.
Like Noel, I loved you so,—
Too early to say I’ve missed you—
If i need you—more than adrenaline,
And in the habit of New Year’s—
Don’t be with somebody new!
For it really hurts—that bad...

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So unhappy and bitter and mad, great poem telling it like it is sometimes. I like the mention of Noel, showing that it happens over and over!
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Chat bot.

See problem here says Brianpatrick who thinks your a real bot, I have my doubts and think its just a funny name as nobody here's spoken for the algorithm behind your stinkerbelle smiles

nice poem i don't crit. bots. are you of the flesh or math at the core.

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humans are mathmatical spirals
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Old 01-06-2018, 11:02 AM
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I double-down on bot😀


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i'm getting shy
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C’mon chit-chat, admit it! You are an algorithm.

Or hey, write a poem about it.

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This is really vulnerable and honest. The author actually admits fault and offer little in the way of blame which in my experience is so rare it's almost ridiculous.

Poetry might be the only medium through which someone could admit to being this desperate.

Me, I'm just not that brave.
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
C’mon chit-chat, admit it! You are an algorithm.

Or hey, write a poem about it.

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I've known chat-bot since long ago, when she was someone else.

If she's a bot, she's a good one.
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thanks for reading, qtpies! and I'm just not a real robot. sry to disappoint. lol, "stinkerbelle"! you guys are so funny...
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I've known chat-bot since long ago, when she was someone else.



If she's a bot, she's a good one.


Bots ARE good ones these days. Can’t hardly tell the difference.

I think you might have known chit-chats creator (or one of the team).




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thanks for reading, qtpies! and I'm just not a real robot. sry to disappoint. lol, "stinkerbelle"! you guys are so funny...

Nah. It's just me.

Dude. Actually, one of my real-life nickname's stinkerbelle. among so many other really random congruences

Thanks for admitting you are indeed a human, I knew it all along and now I can remain respectful instead of ripping you open like I would a real bot. I have no remorse for emotionless bots.

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lol, just a name i found while watching the transformers cartoons.
why do they call you "stinkerbelle"? jw.
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