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Originally Posted by Nacia View Post
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brunette size 8 black straight mid length hair could be curlyish at time
petite slender cheek bone fairly attractive nice slender body haha
need I say no more Ihave been known to struck few looks
I dont really like talking about myself but there you go I will make an exception
I have been called a look like of Jamie lee curtis and Halley berry say no more.


Excellent.

Iíll get started when I get back home. The wife is poking me to pay attention to her.

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Youíre a big sonuvabitch. I can work with that.

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My old flat mate in my late teens. early twenties used to say that. He was a great friend, I always trusted him as the voice of reason, then one day he said "Chin- well not that name, but you get it- I cannot physically hold you back"; I retorted, you will never need to, just tell me when I have gone too far. Genuinely he never needed to.
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
Excellent.

Iíll get started when I get back home. The wife is poking me to pay attention to her.
Aw is she? love is what makes a human I will take it as a compliment.
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I started trying to write in your British dialect but it was crap, so Iím switching to American english.

I need a few more things...

Nacia? Do you work for a living, and if so, at what?

Chin... I need a half written poem about love lost. A good one. Iíd write it myself, but Iím shit at poetry.
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
I started trying to write in your British dialect but it was crap, so Iím switching to American english.

I need a few more things...

Nacia? Do you work for a living, and if so, at what?

Chin... I need a half written poem about love lost. A good one. Iíd write it myself, but Iím shit at poetry.


Edit: Chin, I donít need your occupation, Iíve already assigned you one. Trust me, Iím sure itís not what you do but it suits the story.
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Old 10-07-2018, 10:28 PM
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
I started trying to write in your British dialect but it was crap, so Iím switching to American english.

I need a few more things...

Nacia? Do you work for a living, and if so, at what?

Chin... I need a half written poem about love lost. A good one. Iíd write it myself, but Iím shit at poetry.
I am a linguist/Interpreter/languages teacher.
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I am a linguist/Interpreter/languages teacher.


You speak multiple languages? Hmm... which ones?
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Also, Nacia, do you have green eyes?
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Also, Nacia, do you have green eyes?
No brown eyes haha.
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You speak multiple languages? Hmm... which ones?
French/Spanish/Some Catalan/ and English.
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Blue Spanish eyes
Teardrops are falling from your Spanish eyes
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