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tis sweet
when love covets
and tweets
there is nothing
like a heart
beat
that leaps
when
feeling down creeps
the earth helium streaks
at a speed of sound
premium
space dreams
life enterprises
streams surprises
a star
none the wisest
uprises.

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Warning, I am drunk...

tis sweet
when love covets (why always the short lines, the clipped stanzas? the bonanza of nothing?)
and tweets (ok nothing I am interested in Tweets can go fuck themselves- they are used by morons and idiots)
there is nothing. If this is some evil tweet retardation, I will happily find the king of tweets and make my displeasure known. Ok let's continue..
like a heart beat (Why a new line?)
that leaps when feeling down creeps (like this better as one line)
the earth helium streaks (what?)
at a speed of sound (meaningless?)
premium (bollox)
space dreams, life enterprises
streams surprises, a star (more interesting like this)
none the wisest (twattery from here on in)
uprises.
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Ok, that was odd
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Ok, that was odd
Hi there Chinspinner I always enjoy reading your feedback you obviously have a talent for it.
What do you mean by odd?
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I saw a ghost... sorry, just inserted it.
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I saw a ghost... sorry, just inserted it.


Inserted what?
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Old 10-06-2018, 10:56 AM
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The night is young and already with the innuendo...

No, literally as I was reading this I had an odd experience, in which, in an admittedly drunken reverie, I inserted my cock.

I mean I inserted a half-drunk dream I had where I was accosted by a ghost. She was pleasant and jocular and welcoming of conversion. But it was just a dream.
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The night is young and already with the innuendo...

No, literally as I was reading this I had an odd experience, in which, in an admittedly drunken reverie, I inserted my cock.

I mean I inserted a half-drunk dream I had where I was accosted by a ghost. She was pleasant and jocular and welcoming of conversion. But it was just a dream.


Must tickle the idea pool that you and our Nacia live in the same city. Do you sometimes think that you must have (at one time or another) seen her? Maybe checked out her ass in line at the local chippy.
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Old 10-06-2018, 11:04 AM
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Must tickle the idea pool that you and our Nacia live in the same city. Do you sometimes think that you must have (at one time or another) seen her? Maybe checked out her ass in line at the local chippy.
It is a big city mate.
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Originally Posted by Chinspinner View Post
It is a big city mate.


Too late... Iím already writing the story. Iíll post the first paragraph in a bit and you can tell me if itís shit or not.

Say, Iíll even let you two pick your own names. Iím generous like that.

So, whatíll it be? Sam and Irma? Josephine and Ralph? Todd and Emma? Rashid and Namrita? You pick.
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Jack please
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Jack please


Ok, that works.

Nacia?
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Ok, that works.

Nacia?
Just call her Sarah, or something. I like Sarah, pretty name.

How chauvinistic of me yada yada.
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
Ok, that works.

Nacia?
Are you asking me LOL
what's happening?? I have just seen this.
brian what is going on????
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Just call her Sarah, or something. I like Sarah, pretty name.

How chauvinistic of me yada yada.
Sarah>> now you are talking...who is that??? LOL
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Are you asking me LOL

what's happening?? I have just seen this.

brian what is going on????


Iím writing a love story. Youíre a character. What name would you like me to use for you?

Oh... if youíve never read any of my love stories, donít start now. Might influence your compliance with the whole thing.
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This better be good after all this build up Brian!
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Iím writing a love story. Youíre a character. What name would you like me to use for you?

Oh... if youíve never read any of my love stories, donít start now. Might influence your compliance with the whole thing.
Oh I get it. Ok let's do it.
How about cacian?
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Originally Posted by Chinspinner View Post
This better be good after all this build up Brian!
LOL fingers cross
I like the enthusiasm Brian is cool LOL
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This better be good after all this build up Brian!


Oh it will, it will.

But itís on hold for a bit. My wifeís making me go shopping with her and the boy.
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And since youíre both so cooperative, how about some brief physical appearance details?
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Fine, 6' 4" and 17 stone. I go to the gym- not a fat fucker.

I have a beard, full. I am normal looking, moderately attractive not a stunner but not an ugly bastard.

Have short hair, that is about it.
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How is your story coming along Brian? Wanna read it!
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Fine, 6' 4" and 17 stone. I go to the gym- not a fat fucker.

I have a beard, full. I am normal looking, moderately attractive not a stunner but not an ugly bastard.

Have short hair, that is about it.


Youíre a big sonuvabitch. I can work with that.

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haha Brian, that felt so wrong, sort it.
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Ya think Naciaís passed out already? No idea what time it is there.
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Perhaps mate, This was a thing for you and really wanna read it, but do not use Nacia if she is not on board mate.
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Perhaps mate, This was a thing for you and really wanna read it, but do not use Nacia if she is not on board mate.


I can easily make a complimentary character to Jack without her input
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Upto you fellah, it is your story, would be mor fun with her but fuck it, whatever.
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
You’re a big sonuvabitch. I can work with that.

Nacia?
OK
brunette size 8 black straight mid length hair could be curlyish at time.
petite slender cheek bone fairly attractive nice slender body haha.
need I say no more Ihave been known to struck few looks.
I dont really like talking about myself but there you go I will make an exception.
I have been called a look like of Jamie lee curtis and Halley berry say no more.
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