Are you two fucking insane?
spin the wheel (yes, great start)
and life may not be (may not be what? Oh new line, my mistake)
near (why is this a line unto itself??)
unless (why a line unto itself?) O h fuck this, one moment.
and out of the blue
it wants to be true
and with the measure of time
wishing to be due
it is almost clear
fear wouldn't steer
we will always be here.
spin the wheel (great first line..)
and life may not be near (not sure what this means)
unless secretly (shhh)
and out of the blue (ooh, exciting..)
it wants to be true ("it" what who, where why when? WTF is "it"?)
you and I (yes, us...)
and with the measure of time (what? this is a random topic change? We were discussing... oh nevermind)
wishing to be due (are we now pregnant? What happened?)
it is almost clear (it most certainly is not...)
fear wouldn't steer (are we on a boat now?)
we will always be here. (Okay, not sure who "we" are anymore)
Ok this is your choice. You have had two strangely positive reviews, and then mine. Pick the ones you like the most, but for me this is a mess.