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Old 09-22-2018, 02:50 PM
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love offers
solutions
for those
who abstain from
ablution
the sacrilege pre pollution

there is much resolution in
the way one loves
and cares

living is for those who wear
their hearts on their sleeves
which water could crease

there is less please
in the way one drowns aware
gasping for air is
sanctimonious despair.

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Originally Posted by Nacia View Post
love offers
solutions
for those
who abstain from
ablution

there is much resolution in
the way one loves
and cares

living is for those who wear
their hearts on their sleeves
which water could crease

there is less please
in the way one drowns aware
gasping for air is
sanctimonious despair.

Gave up on verse one

I can't love anybody with personal hygiene issues lady...
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Gave up on verse one

I can't love anybody with personal hygiene issues lady...
Neither do I LOL
I do like a bit of water myself.
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