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I make a Sight—sate or slacken—
Mankind is a Heap—gorged
Or a Term—as I weigh in—
The Tides—do I command,

I hold Preference to the skies—
Greater, in my Hand
Abaft lesser Clout—about—
A foggy Day’s Cloister—

Inasmuch as I Direct it—
It—Life—and Tyranny
Who is the Monocrat—none can find—
Nor was I in the Question—

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Easy Wealth—grew I—
Although my Yield—
Was certain as the Day—
And in the Evening, counted more
Than the previous—notch,

Thru-out the Year, I made the Age
Yet the discernless Game—
Assumed fewer by Increasing—
Than the System that it’d grown.
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so she had thought it often enough, this writing getting harder and the ease with which to usher the words into a pit stop, Grace and chat elegant in their lapping. ‘So made it home babes and they’ll sort it out in a few days, love that school run but it’s dangerous terrain with an unreliable set of wheels’ ... He watched her thoughts triggered, synaptic waves crashing flash flood ... some manufacturers have a reputation for innovation, they put prototypes out there, cheaper than their competitors without exhaustive trials and the consumer burdens the risk. That, back then, had been a sweet ride but it’s design flaws made it incompatible with a life on the road. ‘... ground to a halt once on passing through a tunnel, a busy motorway, speeds like autobahn, middle lane of four and a chatty one in the back oblivious until not then. You know a Porsche shunted us, saw him cruising ever nearer in the rear view mirror, he simply reversed, met anna’s gaze in the passing and sped off. Liquid calm the moment of life-death decision making - whether to get out of the vehicle and flag down the traffic or remain that sitting duck heartbeats away from a pileup. ‘Do you get out and run for the hills, sort of flee this reality or brace yourself, freeze or fight babe? ...’ anna had jumped out and stopped the motorway flow lane by lane, willing them to see her ... only then grabbing the fetal clenched toddler by one arm from his car seat as those purposeful menfolk tried to push her car across to the hard shoulder and continue on thankful for their lives. ‘It had to be dragged over by mechanical winch eventually, gearbox seized. The whole incident over in a matter of minutes ... often wonder if Porch man remembers the deal he made that day.

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Twice thought I that Love had arrived
Though Love had fled the Sight—
Like marooned men—
Expect they scan the mainland—
But midway of Davy Jones’s Locker—

And grapple escapeless—only to test
Just as desperately as me—
How many the illusory Banks—
Afore the Wharf should be.
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