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Old 07-03-2012, 11:54 PM
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Bits of the sphinx
Scattered lay
On an elusive heart
Of eclipse,
Eager for the sun
And moon to blend
Again, end
Mesial imperfections
Of the ever divine,
Most beautiful artó
Yet came naught
As lullaby
To wakeful parts:
Mere shards now,
Impelled
To the lap of oblivion
And the burn
Of foolish souls
For Lethe, surrenders
To flesh
Unblushing forming
The nocturne.

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Tortured.
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I rather detest brevity.My brain is usually incapable to grasp it.

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Your cold enigma plays tangent with my head, o William Sparta.
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