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Ok, I will go for moonlight sonata please. Thanks

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Agreed and Grace you are a nice mystery to me haha.
Nacia, you darling, are the greatest mystery on the planet
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Ok, I will go for moonlight sonata please. Thanks
Good choice...which part?
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this was inspired but i can't crit it 'cause i can't take it seriously. i remember my first ode here on wbeat. it was about a sonnet. maybe i should take a long hard look at my own style before i say the theme is not working for me. but amusing. so nice!
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
Here: he saw the girl, met for a few seconds, and then she was gone.
For some reason this put me in mind of something.
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