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Old 04-09-2018, 08:58 AM
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Jealous, sorrow sulks at Peace.
Angry in the face of calm, violent.
Making the attack, it only wishes release.

Separated from the raging storms of life,
Peace unlike its more volatile cousin desire,
loves its own company, nothing causing strife

Unhappiness and desire a coalition of discontent.
The soft walls of contentment try blocking the assault.
But peace, a frightened bird, is driven away, totally spent.

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Old 04-09-2018, 01:07 PM
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This kind of poetry is over my head, but I will say the rhyme works well. It was almost subtle and I liked that. Anything further you need a real poet good friend
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Old 04-09-2018, 06:14 PM
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thanks daes13 - I'm not a real poet - just feel and write it down.
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