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Old 07-24-2014, 02:30 PM
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I am destined for the great mystery we call future,
and I am destined to find it alone.
I will approach every opportunity as if one has never been presented to me,
And never again will.
I will write to fulfill my capacity for wonder and
joy and
exhaustion,
And I will believe in my own value.
I will worship at my own feet,
And my eyes will be my assurance that I have seen
My own truths.
I will love.
I will run, and scream, and gape at the sight of my new worth.
I will do better than survive.

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Old 07-30-2014, 04:22 AM
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Strong ending! My eyes ran over "gape" thinking "gasp"...(I can't read this morning...but i thought to let you know.

It's clear and has an open feeling. (just my first reactions)

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