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Old 07-24-2014, 02:29 PM
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You will not begin your revolution, but you know you will recognize it when it comes.
You know what it should look like.

You are not aware that
Should is an illusion,

but you are its slave.


You unwittingly submit to the hypocrisy you so vehemently protest,
fueling further the roots of structure and empty existence.

You speak in riddles
and unexplained
rhetoric
to redeem your own contradictions.

Our qualms outnumber the truths of which we are aware.

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Old 07-29-2014, 07:40 AM
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This was your best stanza, IMO

You speak in riddles
and unexplained
rhetoric
to redeem your own contradictions.


Perhaps you can end it there? Just a thought.
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