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Old 05-07-2018, 12:52 PM
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love easy
slightly cheesy

love clever
is endeavour

but love true
is for those
that needs it
the most
and that's you
but
only with a view
that to treat right
is the new

life is a little eloquent
correct and collect
or it is delinquent.

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a lesson in
life is a pound
in sound
it reminds us
it is expensive a fine
so bear one
in mind

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(of course the goblin loved the poem, but more to the point he loved seeing Nacia returned here too, saying "...her honeymoon perhaps, maternity leave then, or just prison as usual, naah please don't dampen my imagination here with such inconveniences as the truth now, instead say nothing and leave me just wondering which one it was then...", and with that the goblin's sunny day was made, somehow the goblin knew women should always be mysterious where men should be dependable)
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hello fleamailman nice to see you here.
loving your feedback and yes women may be mysterious but men more curious
investigative which makes it all the worth a while.
I was just taking a break and oh I did correct the piece but it was not quite right
it is now I think it reads better
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Yes, good to see you back, Nacia.
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Yes, good to see you back, Nacia.
Prodigalson thank you nice to be back
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Originally Posted by Nacia View Post
love easy
slightly cheesy

love clever
is endeavour

but love true
is for those
that needs it
the most
and that's you
but
only with a view
that to treat right
is the new
because
without eloquence
life is a little delinquent.
Love is seeing Nacia back!
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PickleBottom thank you and it is very nice for you to say that
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