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I’m waiting for you to pen a letter detailing love through words and whatnot.
You think clever scribbling of romance and justice through actions of elephant sadness breaks me?

You will not defeat me to dust,
I approach like a conquistador with every ounce of {strength}
handling the note.

Give it all you’ve got mistress and your words
I wait hearing the worst.


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interesting.

''elephant sadness''

this a new expression I have never heard of.

I guess this piece says it all:
the words mistress and the worst is perhaps revealing.

well done. Good writing
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Is revealing a bad thing?
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Is revealing a bad thing?
no it is not .
why do you ask?
would you mind clarifying the expression Yonathan thanks.
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no it is not .
why do you ask?
would you mind clarifying the expression Yonathan thanks.
I am just wondering, also the expression means sadness, nothing more.
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I am just wondering, also the expression means sadness, nothing more.


Presumably, profound or large sadness. Thatís how I read it.
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Presumably, profound or large sadness. Thatís how I read it.
profound I am not sure because an elephant is not.
large could be because an elephant is to be reckoned with
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profound I am not sure because an elephant is not.


Maybe not in the strictest definition of the word, but poetically the meaning was obvious to me. In fact, it was my favorite part of this.

Maybe you should smoke a joint and watch a couple of elephant documentaries😀
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Maybe not in the strictest definition of the word, but poetically the meaning was obvious to me. In fact, it was my favorite part of this.

Maybe you should smoke a joint and watch a couple of elephant documentaries😀
LOL smoke a joint?? no
that was a long time ago now I need my head clear at all time.
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