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Old 05-28-2018, 03:15 AM
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memory
can startle agony
to be reminded is
felony

to be in the know is
gain worth a train
knowledge superb a foe
condemns it
which lets it
nowhere to hide has it

strength is a game of mind
the more it exposes the blow and the better chances it has to
grow

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i like your style. very confessional and close. nice work, nacia!
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Good stuff Nacia! I like where you took this poem! The message is clear!
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