bread and wine
and the menu
dine (wrong tense and why the new line, must you define the sublime with bad rhymes?)
according to the
the (repetition) frescos, in many ways a fiasco, may have
been the best though, (Oh, this should be good fresco-fiasco-best though... just wish you did more with it!)
but cheese is the chosen (and this, if in a better context, is great!)
feast to accompany
the grapes of this elevated kind,
is this supper a waste
that shows mercy only the blind?
Dam, Nacia, there is so much wasted potential here, you have some great rhymes and lines, just wish you could pull them together into a cohesive whole.