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Old 09-15-2018, 04:28 PM
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spin the wheel
and life may not be
near
unless
secretly
and out of the blue
it wants to be true
you and
I
and with the measure of time
wishing to be due
it is almost clear
fear wouldn't steer
we will always be here.

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Somebody get me a chair...Nacia wrote a poem that has a resonance with me...and it made SENSE

You're either getting good at this...or I'm descending into the same madness.

Seriously...well done girl. x
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Somebody get me a chair...Nacia wrote a poem that has a resonance with me...and it made SENSE

You're either getting good at this...or I'm descending into the same madness.

Seriously...well done girl. x
Grace so glad you like this one
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