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Hope Is a Thing With Feathers, Mostly

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Old 09-10-2018, 12:38 PM
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Hope: a thing with feathers
Please keep wishing for that naked star.
We’ll loosen that binding necktie

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Bravo! Bravo!

"Hope: a thing with feathers" either Icarus and his adhered wings or a weird fetish.
"Please keep wishing for that naked star" either the sun that melted the glue, or a weird fetish for a particular starlet.
"We'll loosen that binding necktie" Either the neck binding of Icarus' wings or a weird fetish.

So many meanings.
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Originally Posted by Chinspinner View Post
Bravo! Bravo!

"Hope: a thing with feathers" either Icarus and his adhered wings or a weird fetish.
"Please keep wishing for that naked star" either the sun that melted the glue, or a weird fetish for a particular starlet.
"We'll loosen that binding necktie" Either the neck binding of Icarus' wings or a weird fetish.

So many meanings.
Thanks for your insights to this piece. I had a lot of fun writing and drafting it so.
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