Well done - no edits from this pen - I know the original article was written for those with money who made more money under the Little Shrub and therefore can pay for all the health in the world, and travel first class.
Screw 'em! (Is that too rude - sorry!)
If I did not tell you all the changes you might consider, I would be doing you a disservice, treating you with less than the full respect you deserve. This much I have learned from my years teaching and mentoring writers.
Riverstones let the water flow around them.