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Old 02-29-2012, 03:28 AM
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The challenge was to use the words "cold shoulder " in a 60 word flash. I decided to pun it: does it work?

Dad ignores the roast chicken dinner I prepared, it might as well have been cold shoulder of turkey instead. I smile at him, he scowls and retires early without saying goodnight. I should never have taken his last ten bucks to gamble and will give it back. But the ninety grand I won is mine, until he trashes the attitude.

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awesome ! - M
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Hi Louis,

Liked it! Would do the same. LOL

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