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Running Forwards Moving Back

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Old 04-02-2010, 07:59 AM
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Default Running Forwards Moving Back


Stuck here on the side of the road
With no reason to go back home
Ainít been the same since you left here
Being alones become my biggest fear

I just want to forget the past
But some memories always last
Try to do something new
But everything leads me to you

Chorus
Cuz Iím running forwards
And moving back
I just can't get my
Heart on track
And of all the things
One things true
The more I run
The more I move towards you


I usually donít act this way
But my bright clouds have turned grey
Everyone seeís the sun still shines
But thatís in their world Cuzí in mine

Chorus
Iím running forwards
And moving back
I just can't get my
Heart on track
And of all the things
One things true
The more I run
The more I move towards you

Iíve gotta find a way to stop running back to you
And getting no where
Iíve gotta find away to take off these running shoes
And face the truth but till thennnnn

Chorus
Iím running forwards
And moving back
I just can't get my
Heart on track
And of all the things
One things true
The more I run
The more I move towards you

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Old 04-21-2010, 07:40 AM
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I liked the opening verse and chorus. It was very nicely "worded". I think you could make it much better by tweaking it a little, The first verse just after the chours i'd maybe change. A part from that, well done.
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