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Neglectful behind the hearth, lo a tiger
Swaying just like a good day.

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Old 10-05-2016, 10:13 AM
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I counted eighteen syllables, instead of the traditional seventeen of a Haiku. Was that intentional?
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I'm confused... like always.. but it's nice writing
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This is great.
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Lo lo lo

Oh this tiger.

Roar & Meow.

Let's discuss this Noel Tink love your words fairy
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i wish la la la,
that most folks
didn't have to die
forever!
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